Pleminary Task - Marked and returned

I received my marked pleminary task back the other lesson.


If I were to do this task again, designing the magazine for a school, I would probably not include the background of St Marks school. At the time it seemed like a good idea, but upon reflection I feel it isn't necessary for the magazine. There aer also minor issues such as the light in the background, and the reflection in the windows.






I felt that the contents page was quite well done. The organisation of different sections in a table had a really good effect and made the magazine appear tidy. The fault that I discovered when looking at the front cover and the contents was that the house style wasn't necessarily kept identical. For example, for "Taylor's Tribe", I used the same font, although it doesn't appear the same because on the contents page I stretched the title of the magazine out, so the font appears to be different. It would have been a good idea to make the "contents" text a bit smaller, so I could have had the top of the front cover exactly the same on the contents page. The other fault was that I forgot that the requirement that it had to be original photography, and I included a joke picture that got online, which I will obviously make sure I do not do on the final task.

Overall I was happy with the magazine, and with the few changes I would like to make will be taken into consideration for my music magazine, such as making sure the house style remains the same.